Kemo and I had a great class this morning. We only had about 9 people, which I think is a perfect size, actually. Great comments.
I noticed that CS4 needs to be edited a bit. It reads a bit awkwardly, in that it initially introduces the employee as David, but then refers to same staff member as "staff," as in ""customer and staff stand there talking."
One thing I plan to discuss at the meeting is the method we will use to make edits of this type. Please make a note of any items you feel are in need of editing.
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